The remaining 'flesh' on the girl lacks the nescesary contrast, espescially in the face. The crop could have been tighter on the top to increase tension.

The entire composition could have been stronger, as it is, it's very ordinary and doesn't have an impact and/or doesn't grab the user's attention for as long as it COULD with this concept!

Also, the change from stone to flesh is abrupt which looks a little weird...I'd like to see more a transition. With so many people using this idea we've all seen it in movies and such- like having the veins pop up turning gray into stone and finally the flesh following- something like that. Take a fanciful idea and apply fanciful science to it, to make it look real.

I'd like to see some better anatomy studies from you... all the figures in your work, though getting better, are very stringy and too smooth. For example, the gesture of the in the back right looks odd. She's in a very tense position yet we don't see that in her muscles.. what I'm getting at is: you're trying to make them look graceful, but that doesn't work all of the time...it just turns unrealistic.