Lilith
Lilith
Painting \ Figure | 03/22/05 @108 |
PeachySticks |
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My first time painting a dark skintone--and so much of it, too! This is Lilith the dark elf, I'm told she's BAD. I tried to loosen up a bit with my brushstrokes.I realize there must be a million anatomical mistakes, but I really really tried, plus it's already sent to the publisher. Just so you know.
Cover for Dragon Master 9 by Hotupub, (c) Hotu Publishing.
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03/22/05 @110
this is a great piece! I like the details on the scepter and the water dripping from the background. The hair is flowing really dynamic. Great lighting.
Max points!
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+10
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The only thing that seems strange to me is the fact, that her face is one of a very young child (small chin, bigger forehead etc) and the body of a full grown woman.
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Amazing!
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maybe the staff can be exagerated more, like..change the angle abit, instead of pointing directly to the front, u can change it to sideways alittle bit. that way, we can see the perspective clearer.
overall, i like the lighting. and the skin tone is gorgeous~!! ^^
i notice something on the leg. her bottom left leg seems chopped off. maybe a hint of shadow will help.
hope this helps. ^^
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but her hairs are looking artificial...im sorry but right now its look like a wig on a bald head.
rest is cool
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I dont have anything to crit.. so I guess you'll have to do with a "good job" post
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Only crit: The waste is too small compared to the rest of the body.
Do something with that 'sketch2' you added. It's great.
03/22/05 @851
I have two things to crit though: First is her face which bugs me a bit, it looks too.. "anime-ish", like the features aren't realistic enough in comparison to the realism of her body shading etc.
Second are the parts of her.. armour? on the forearms... I kind of can't specify what they are, what they are made out of etc, but it's just nitpicking really.
I totally love soem small elements like the cape, the cape-holder-armour thing around her neck as well a that little copper? ring which holds that belt she has around her hips. totally lovely.
And that strong light adds to the glory of the picture. this is my definite favourite of yours. Wonderful
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If I was able to give a higher rating I would darling.
I enjoyed taking a peek at the step by step process. Gives me a few ideas on how to finish hand painting a portrait I started and kind of stopped.
Thanks so much for not only sharing your tallent but how you came about making such a striking picture!
The details in her face are what grab me the most. I was delighted to see the transformation in your directory folder.
Seccond, the action and pose over all are just fabu!
Third, the way you were able to manipulate the darker tones with the amazing highlites. This by far is ace work.
I also must mention that the background just brings it all together for who you describe her to be. It is perfect.
Don't change a thing!
I will be picking up that next issue of Dragon Master 9 for sure to add to the wall of inspiration. WOW!
BTW, I really enjoy your work. I look forward to many more in the future.
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breathing2004: yes, her expression is supposed to be "angry and perverse"
Aneley: haha, maybe her face looks a little *too* young, but past experience have taught me to better draw a younger face than to draw an older face, and have the client saying she looks way too old!
shadowlord: hmm, I'll take that as a compliment
matsuru: yeah I could have drawn the staff with some more twists and turns, I swear I was planning to but then it turned out kinda stright. And I was too lazy to change it.
shyamshriram: ahahaha, touche
SailorDidi: some are way off ^^;
ARTOONATOR: The waste?
BlacKeri: I did intentionally make her face look young, maybe it's the pointy shape that's giving the anime vibe? The triangular face shape is associated with evilness... I think... and that was the basis for that. Those arm things, to be honest, I have no idea.
ultraviolet: "dynamic" isn't what people would usually say about my work, I'm glad this one has a bit more movement.
Astarte66: thanks ^^ that must have taken you a while to type.
The rest of you also who commented/voted, thank you so much!
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- Rene
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I'll also admit that I'm a HUGE fan of the MMOG "Lineage 2" and she looks like she just walked out of the game... The dark elves in it have a similar aesthetic.
I'm not seeing the "Millions of anatomical errors" you mentioned. It looks really good to me, especially the subtle musculature of the abdomen. The only (small) thing I noticed was that the staff arm does look a wee bit off; as if the hand should be at a different angle in relation to the arm...
Eh, don't listen to me though. You've got more talent in your little finger than I've got in my whole body.
Full marks, looking forward to more!
03/23/05 @286
Unfortunately, I can't provide you any criticism because (A) I lack the experience/knowledge &
I do agree with BlacKeri in that I can't really distinguish what material the arm armour is made of. It almost seems as if it penetrates & disappears into her right wrist.
Again, great work.
03/23/05 @297
drows rulez!
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Flowjoe
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Leo
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The definition of the rib cage is a bit chisled/harsh and her cape although I imagine it is supposed to be flapping in the underground breeze...looks a little stiff. I can't tell if it is going to the side....or in front, about to wrap around her...I figure the latter since it has a highlight as well, but if that were the case...why does she have so much highlight on her, and would her highlight give some ambient light to the underside of the cape?
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Sorry....sounds nitpicky, but besides the cape, and the ribs...this is one of my favorites of yours (in terms of execution) You always do well in establishing an environment that is interactive with the character, and again you really pushed the contrast as you did with your 'Empress' piece.
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I really the darkened skintone .. i could not find any anatomical issues except that the hair doesn't look quite attached on her scalp .. but i still love it anyways as it gives a dynamic feeling to this piece .. there is something with her face that is quite catchy and appealing too
Again; amazing piece of art .. your skills are developing extremely well ..
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Her face seems to be more refined than the rest of her.
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03/24/05 @009
Girl, your painting skills are getting more and more amazing! I dunno, I love it! Specualy her face. Is she that bad? Anyone can fall in love with her! I love the pose and all the details, specially her tiny clothes and how her hair flows. Amazing girl! My max for you!
03/24/05 @128
Great work.
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Awesome work as usual!!!
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+max
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HAH! Who cares, your painting just pwns!!!!
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I like her hair, her eyes, her body (even the skintone looks a bit strange to me, but if I look at it with attention, I like it )and her culottes X)
....at the end, the only thing I really dislike is her face, if i look only at the body I like it
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The only detail that I'm not completely convinced with, is the look of her face, which seems a bit doll-like, if you know what I mean.
Great light, great figure, I think this is a very good work!
01/30/06 @601
I really love the fact that she looks so young but already poisend with evil and stuff. Really really love it.
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